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is this a good poem?
i made it up:
once there was a boy
he lived by the shore
he played with a toy
man, he was a bore! (link)
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Sorry to say this but...
IT SUCKED...
Do u seriously think thats poetry? "good" poetry at that?
You should of never posted it
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this time im going to bleed
i need to finish this deed
all this pain i kept inside
it will no longer hide
all this pain you put me through
now i say I HATE YOU
u tried to do the best for me
but why cant you see
im failing classes
i doubt any im passin
ive hurted for so long
i cant be strong
for this is my last
now ive passed....
(link)
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Very good poem
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