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Last Update: April 17, 2010
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18/m, student at college. When writing a covering letter, how much do you need to suck up? I have googled lots of websites for advice, but its all the standard info, nothing practical (greatly). Like this cookie store has a part-time opening. They are litterelly known for the best cookies in the city, but i dont know if i should put that? Because it seems a bit "im desperate for the job"?
Theres also a family run coffee store/deli opening. They dont even have a website, so i can't even research the company? Any idea's for that. I do have a passion for food, but i dont think thats enough? Any practical help withh be great, thanks in advance folks :) (link)
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There are varied opinions on cover letters. Some "business" experts suggest making a splashy, enthusiastic letter that garners attention. Over the years, I have been more impressed by simple statements of fact such as:
Dear ____;
Please accept the attached resume in application for the present part-time opening in your company as a _____. I am an 18 year-old college student looking for an opportunity to get practical work experience and help pay the rent.
"I am confident that I can do a good job for your company. I am well aware that your company takes pride in the qulaity of your cookies and customer service.I am reliable as evidenced by _____. You can get confirmation of my good character from the references supplied in the resume.
I am available for an interview at your convenience and employment as of (date) and can be most easily reached at (phone number). I look forward to hearing from you."
Key things employers are looking for are reliability and flexibility.
good luck!
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excellent advice, thank you very much :)
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