Hey there everyone! My name is Rory... I am 14.. I am a TOTAL beach bum -hehe :) i love it! some other things i love are my friends- i have the best of the best! ummm hangin with them... beach, movies... boys :D(haha typical 14 year old girl!) ummmmm i dunno what else to say... if your in need of a friend, i'll try my best to help! :)
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Occupation: beach bum/student... Durr
Age: 14
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Well I wrote this, not really a poem, just kind of a one of those little writings.. will you tell me what you think of it so far... maybe some help on it, or wordings that would sound better?
After spending hours on end perfecting every detail about herself, she heard the doorbell ring. Her heart races to see him. This was the moment she had been waiting for, for so very long now.She lopes quickly to the front door and swiftly swings it open to see her love. Her heart sinks inside of her chest in her overwhelmed body and her beathing has stopped as if her heart would have. He looks amazing, more amazing than ever before. Not a word comes out of either of their mouths, both stand there completely speechless, both infatuated by their prescences's beauty... (link)
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Wow. Thats wonderful, i wish I could write like that... the best i can come up with is *roses are red, violets are blue, sugar is sweet, and so are you* (and i stole that from whoever made it up). I think you could have a future in writing!
Stay beautiful! Stay you!
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