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This poem. Needs help. it didn't come out right. Suggestions?
I saw you tonight
For the first time in what had felt like years
Sweat dripped off your body
And I realized what I had lost
I had loved
And you had pitied
But you had forgotten
What I could not
With you standing so close
It drove me crazy
I miss you I cried
But I don’t miss your lies
I wont forget you
Even if you’ve already forgotten me
Don’t pity me
I’m fine. (link)
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i had forgotten you ever since we left eachother
then i saw you..for what had seemed like forever
i watched you look pasted me
and remembered when you you looked pasted everybody but me
then my heart dropped a thousand feet
and i needed to take a seat
i thought about it for a long time
and i've come to a conclusion that i miss you more than ever
in one second i realized i liked you again
then in a minute..i realized i loved you for a second time
and i hope you will know..even if you never like me again..it will take a lifetime for me to forget you
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