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uh, i just wrote this poem and i wanna see if u think its good.i dont kno wut to name it tho. so here it is:

There's love i miss
A desired kiss
A someone to hold
Their loveletters to unfold
Love i wish to have
But this i can't
To risk my heart i shan't
To take that risk
Is to risk the miss
Of losing something that once was
All because
We fools who love
Will risk beyond and above
To have that chance
To take that fall
All because of love's true call

by:me,taryn collins!
wut do you think?i hope you like it.
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wow! thats one amazzzzzing poem! i cant even think of that, it probably comes deep from inside! i feel the same way!


Rating: 5
thank you!




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