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ok, here it goes. i love writing. and not just writing, but expressing myself. its amazing what i can say to get everything out. the anger, the hate, the love, the happiness. every emotion known. i want to express myself through writing, but i am having such difficulty doing it. all of my emotions, problems, and stories are building up inside of me and i cant let them out on paper. i just go blank. i dont know what to write. but i WANT to so badly. please give me advice to solve my befuddling problem, or different ways i can express myself without becoming overwhelmed. everything is starting to built up inside of me. i just want to let it all out.
please help me
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Do you have IM? Please, I want to help.
AIM: JenSparkles88
MSN: JenSparkles88@hotmail.com
Please, don't hesitate for ANYTHING. I'm open and willing. I know what you feel like, I understand. Just IM me, all right? Don't worry. Everything will be okay. Just calm down, sweetie. It'll be fine.
-Jen
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Sorry I'm not much help on here right now, but I'm in the middle of a crisis.
Let me try again:
Start venting to a friend (or me). Let everything flow. Just scream and bitch and whine and whatever the hell you want to do. It's hard to write when you don't know what you need to write about. Just SCREAM. It helps.
Next, save the conversation or something. Let it inspire you, and write down ANYTHING that comes to mind: words, lyrics, music, ANYTHING.
Releasing yourself is something that you need to do. If you can't find words, find voice, find colors, find the notes on an instrument, or find your feet in the middle of the woods in the dark night. Do SOMETHING. Being bored just adds to stress. Find something new to do.
I'd consider signing up for a kick-boxing class to get out anger, or invest in a punching bag. They help.
If you need more ideas, please, don't hesitate to IM me. I just want you to feel better. My mission is to make people happy when they need it most. I'm here for you.
-Jen
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You never know what someone means to you until their gone.
Those are good words to live by, and here’s why.
Once a day, everyday I talked to two girls that rode my bus.
They were twins, and also older than me, they were seventeen.
They were always nice, not even once were they mean.
We would talk about all sorts of things.
They even helped Kyla with one of her reports.
I remember Kim would always drop her books on the floor.
One time Kathy tripped walking out the door.
Soon school was out, I had no fear that I would see them next year.
But I was wrong.
I heard about the accident from a friend, I didn’t know what she meant.
She said it was a car accident and they went to the hospital.
But I didn’t think anything of it.
I got online to look up any information about the accident.
It took me a while, but I found an article.
It was named “Twin Disaster”.
I started reading slow and I got faster and faster.
I couldn’t believe what I had read.
The accident was really bad.
Their car was hit by a pick up truck
The car was so smashed that they were stuck.
The paramedics came and got them out.
There were five people involved in the accident.
They were all alive, but Kim and Kathy were barley living.
So they were rushed to the hospital.
The article said the other passengers would be all right.
The next day I got a phone call.
It was my friend she said Kim and Kathy had passed on.
She also asked if I wanted to go to the funeral.
I said no because it was more of a family thing.
I soon got off of the phone and started crying.
I later found out that they both had died around eleven.
I was happy that they were in heaven and didn’t have to suffer.
But it was so sad because they were so young.
I remember them telling me they were going to go to the Career Center.
But they never will.
I know the guy that had hit them didn’t go out that night to kill.
But he did, he ended two teenagers lives.
They didn’t get to get married, have a kid, and so much more.
I feel so sorry for their mother because she didn’t only loose one child.
She lost two; it must be so hard to live in the house without them there.
I think everyone should live their lives to the fullest,
And never take anything for granted.
Because you never know what something means to you until it’s gone.
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I don't think this is original. Sorry, I just can't say that it works. Try again with something creative.
Good luck trying to be original.
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"Run Away"
Run, run, run away.
Run away for it’s just begun.
Nothing is left to learn; nothing can be done.
Run away and never return.
Don't let it burn just,
Run, run, run away.
Don't confront the fears.
Run away and leave the tears.
Don't retreat.
It'll show defeat, so just,
Run, run, run away
"Life"
So much anger; so much sadness.
How'd I get myself wound up in all this madness?
To much stress; to much drama.
How do I clear up this mess?
So many tears; so little fears.
It's been like this for years.
Just young; trying to have fun.
Not many smiles; not many dreams.
All I hear are distant screams.
Lot's of fights; including sleepless night.
I'm trying...
But there's so much lying; so much crying...
"I am"
People say I'm a sinner.
But I'm just a beginner.
Yea, I've done some things wrong.
But that's what makes me strong,
I take life for how it is.
I live my life around the people I adore.
I am who I am; why do they care?
Why do they always sit and stare?
I know I'm not the worst,
But I am the first to stand up and say,
I am who I am.
- Are these any good? Be honest please!! And if you don't like them or would change something about them tell me! (link)
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First thing's first: COPYRIGHT THEM!!!! NOW!!! Just put the little copyright symbol somewhere on here and the date and your name/ nickname/forum name, and nobody can legally take them.
Now, I really like both of them. ^_^ "Life" is my favorite. I think it's the most original; it is brilliant.
On "Life" and "I am," watch your punctuation. All the semi-colons tend to get in the way and distract the reader. Other than that, I really like them! If you want help getting published, contact me.
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