i rly d0nt wanna say anything personal
this isnt about being personal. it is for help that i need and tht i can give you =]
but i AM a TEENAGE girl . thts pretty much all you needa no. but , mayb if we become okay il let you no somemore about ME . BUT NOT Just anyone can no about ME ; BUt imma Rly nice Person and i love giving advice . but need it myself sometimes . ! =] sooo let me here your questions an im ususaly pretty good with given advice .
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OK i need all of your opinions! i have to write a story, and i'm deciding between two plots. I need as many opinions as possible please! thanks
1. about a girl, 15 or so, her mother died when she was very young, over the summer she is in a store and meets a woman in her 30's, 40's, the woman tells her about a place up the mountain where she is landscaping this whole big beautiful garden like thing. The woman offers to teach her to garden in return for the girl helping out. they start to do that and become friend. All the while the younger girl is kind of seeing this woman as a mother figure even though the woman isn't doing anything motherly, they're just friends. In the end, she puts too much trust in the woman, and is disapointed because the woman like goes away without telling her or something else bad that she knows a "mother" wouldn't do. And it's basically about that, just how when people want something so badly they see things that aren't really there. She wanted a motherly so desperately that she clung to anyone and was let down.
2. a girl in ny city, her mother dies and she finds an adress of a family member(she doesn't know any of her relatives) they live down south so she goes there to find them. She finds out that her "mother" is actually her aunt her took her away when her mother went crazy. So it's about her learning about the south and meeting family and getting to know her mom.
which should i do? i'm better at descriptions than big exciting course of events. which one is more original and crative, and what should i do? does the first one seem like boring, like it's been done before and is too disney, cliche, boring?
PLEASE HELP ME DECIDE
I really want it to be well written
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i like the second one ; its interesting, and different, the first ones kinda of boring to me no offense just honesty. stick with the second one
goodluck
yooh could be an amazing writer some day :)
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i have this huge problem this boy jus broke up with my best friend lizy and today i sorta hung out wit hym but he grabbed my bff emme's ass i mean she is supper skinny and totally dosent have one lol but she ii let hym do that cuz i really really like hym o should ii oo idno please help me!!!!!!! PLEEASEE (link)
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Lol,Well Talk to your Friend First, if shes your freind then you should chose her over a guy, and get her consent to hang out wit him & what not but if she says it makes her uncomfortable and hurt then fall baQ, but the thing wit him grabbin the others girl butt dont rly mean nutyhn [evn if she has one er not lol] but, he could jus b messin around & she likes the attention, all girls like attention [specialy from a guy] lookinto it summore before making conclusions, just make sure you talk to your other freind abuot hangin out wit him and stuff before you do it, you wouldnt wanna fuck up a good freindship b.c u liked some guy.
hope i helped & lemme kno how it al works out
goodluck .
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