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Q: so I hav Eng speaking exam about my hobby.and I wrote wt i should say but I am 100 % sure that i hav lots of mistakes so plz corret me .English is not my mother language.

So here it is
Everybody in the world has hobbies to make thier free time enjoyable and useful. Hobbies have alot of benefits and advantages like improving skills,having fun and learn new things.

Hobbies differ from a person to another depend on what we like, So today I am going to talk about my favorite hobby . It is drawing ,because I am good at it and I can express myself on it ,I began to draw when I was 10 years old. I love to draw landscape, and faces,My favorite painter is Jozef Terner.
Finally I hope to be like him in future and to improve myself in other field

and thank alot for answering i will pray for you. ;)
What the other person before me wrote is perfect.I'd edit,though,just a few sentences like 'I love to draw'and 'I began to draw'. I'd write 'I love drawing'and 'I began drawing' instead. Hope you do great!

thanks you

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