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I'm writing a horror story. I normally write romances so blood and guts is a little new to me. So far the only thing I have is the setting which is an old abandoned town near where I live but I need some really good plot ideas. I don't want ghosts or monsters or 'the thing in the closet' or anything like that. Somewhere along the lines of a murder mystery. I'm really interested in the Black Daliah murder even though its so sick and twisted I want a story thats unexpected.
I got onto this idea because yesterday I was walking with my boyfriend down a trail that used to be a railroad that was closed down after too many accidents and it runs behind this abandoned town and while we were walking, besides the fact that I was already creeped out, we found a bunch of bones, that I'm pretty sure were from a deer..but still...Creepyyyy.

So..any ideas?
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I love to write as well so let me see if I can help you out some.

You want something like in real life.. AS the Black Daliah murder, which was amazing..

Something like It's a small most likely abandoned town near you..

Perhaps it was abandond because many years ago... A man went crazy... He found his wife cheating on him, and his children hated him.. He hated his job 5 miles from his home.. The people in town just seemed to drive this man insane, and his wife was a complete bitch to him, so he started with the kids and his wife and he murdered everyone intown and everyone who entered the town from that day forward.. Reasontly he's brought people in and made some what of a cult, and rule this town, so that it lives on. ... . Then if you want you can go into maybe a team of whatever doing an investigation on it... involve some kind of demon into it all or something...


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Haha thats awesome..and a little weird because while I was down there a creepy guy started talking to us and then he went into one of these abandoned buildings (windows so dirty you couldn't see in them and half the wall missing) and started yelling at a group of people in there.




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