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Q: okay im having so much touble writing a song. i have the idea of what i want it to be but i have no idea where to start. it's about a girl who likes a guy and theyre great friends. they talk a lot and would tell each other anything. she feels like she has a chance and regrets not doing anyting about it. she always thinks about him.
thats basicly it. if anyone has any ideas that could possibly help me i will gladly except them =D
thanks
well i came up with this song so hopefully it helps [if you like it please dont take it word by word:)]

-->being around him it's so great and ohh
i really like him,of that im so sure
it dosent matter if his hearts not mine
cuz by just talking to him i have the greatest time
[bridge]its so amazing how he's always on my mind
ohhh...
cant he see that i love him?
is he just that blind?
[chorus]its his eyes,his hair
his touch,his smile
the way he talks to me
it's the way he's great
i appreciate & he means so much 2 me
ohhh cant he see?
that i want him next 2 me.]
as im starring at the walls
i picture & imagine seeing him in the halls
& the conversations sometimes get so deep
it's like being in the ocean
i forget to breathe
& i feel mutualness
coming from this great attraction
i cant even concentrate
he's my biggest distraction
[bridge]...
[chorus]...x2




Thanks a bunch!
i love the chorus =D

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dulce8nina
Wats up?! my name is laura people call me lauris or dee nee wich is short for dulce nina:]
i stay at south central & i can be hella ghetto but ima keep it good for this.
im usually pretty good at listening to peoples problems & i dont know exactly what to say at times or i may not say much at times but when i do it really means alot so feel free to drop me a question if youd like & i promise ill get back:]
if yew wish add me on my yahoo-->dulce_niina
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