Member Since: July 24, 2008
Answers: 123
Last Update: August 15, 2008
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Ok, I've been looking at your advice column. You tend to give good advice but honestly, your grammar is bad and what you type is really hard to read.
I'm not trying to be mean, honestly. I'm just giving you a tip.
Some of the advice you give is brilliant, and you have a good view on things, but please clean up the grammar because it took me four attempts to read one of your answers to understand what it was about.
Don't bitch at me for this. It's just a comment.
And once again, I'm not trying to be mean, You're a good advicenator.
Read through some of your answers and see where you've made mistakes.
Like this one maybe:
Sometimes it's hard on thing's that happen's between friends, but she seem's to be the cold kind with no feeling's , I would look for another friend before she might try something that might cause damege and hurt you.
None of those apostrophe S's were needed. :)
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I am not mad at you i know that my writing is not that good that's the best i can do, i have a cyst on my brain and ever since it started giving me problem's i have had problems writng reading and talking, i am on two very srong medications for my cyst, and i am trying to stop taking then, but this medicine have some chemical it is like i am hooked and can't stop taking it, i used to do better then now and i also was very sick for 15 years till i started experamenting with alternetive medicene and i say i am about 6 out of 10 better, belive me i was dying that is how bad i was, i only thank Jesus Christ my savior for his help, Tell me if you want me to stop giving addvice i will stop, my goal is to try to help any one if i can, in no way i intend to hurt no one, ounce again i thank you for you're honesty and kindness.
HEALER
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Rating: 5
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No no, I don't want you to stop giving advice.
Sorry, I did not know about this.
I honestly hope you get better :)
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