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Well this is the first song i've written it's not that good but i just need advice on how i can improve the song or if it's good or if i need to change afew words
heres the song-
Over you
You left like you never knew me
You could've stayed
We could've worked it out
But you just took off and ran
Oh baby if only you knew
How much i loved you
& needed you Ohhh
But babe i'm just so over you
Over you
Completely over you
Ohhh overrr you
I just don't need you
Over you
So many sleepless night
& never did you care
So many tears and fears
& you were never there
I've worked real hard &
Never mind the nights i had to cry
Better off without you ooohhh
But babe i'm just so over you
Over you
Completely over you
Ohhh overrr you
I just don't need you
Over you
You were just so crul
You lied so many times
made me cry so many times
You'll come back no doubt
But boy im so much smarter and wiser
i dont need you
I got through alone
Babe Im just so voer youu
Overr you yehhh
Over youuuu
wow!
for your first song
that is great!!!
i know people who have been writing songs for almost a year and they arent nearly as good as the song you've just written
i write songs myself if u ever need ideas or want to know wut someone thinks let me know
but like i was saying great job
cant wait to read more!
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(Rating: 5)
Thankk you :):):) lol xD
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