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Well this is the first song i've written it's not that good but i just need advice on how i can improve the song or if it's good or if i need to change afew words
heres the song-
Over you
You left like you never knew me
You could've stayed
We could've worked it out
But you just took off and ran
Oh baby if only you knew
How much i loved you
& needed you Ohhh
But babe i'm just so over you
Over you
Completely over you
Ohhh overrr you
I just don't need you
Over you
So many sleepless night
& never did you care
So many tears and fears
& you were never there
I've worked real hard &
Never mind the nights i had to cry
Better off without you ooohhh
But babe i'm just so over you
Over you
Completely over you
Ohhh overrr you
I just don't need you
Over you
You were just so crul
You lied so many times
made me cry so many times
You'll come back no doubt
But boy im so much smarter and wiser
i dont need you
I got through alone
Babe Im just so voer youu
Overr you yehhh
Over youuuu (link)
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This song is perfect the way it is. You want to know why? Because you wrote it. And we can all tell that it was how you were feeling becuase of all the words in it. Noone can make it better than you. You're the only one who knows how you're feeling and how you want the song to be. Sure we can help you but then it won't be a song from the heart. A song you wrote by yourself from expirence.
Don't worry. I love it! Sounds awesome. Wouldn't change anything. You should record it. It might actually change your life. Who knows right?
Sincerly,
^.^
Kitty.
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