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I'm not very booksmart, and I'm definately not street smart. However, if there's one thing I am, it's PEOPLE SMART. That's why I'm good with this whole advice thing. You can ask me ANYTHING and I'm always glad to help. There's almost no question I can't handle, so ask away. Make sure you RATE and leave FEEDBACK, so I can improve my advice.
infinate x's and o's,
cindy

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a guy, a girl
ment to be
together forever
nothing more to see

been through so much
they could outlast it all
they were destined to be
as every one could see..

so much love between the two..
as if everyone knew..
that they would last forever..

everyone was wrong..
the love is now gone
the girl is gone

they were ment to be..
forever and beyond..
and thats how it will be..
while shes dying in his arms..


do you like the poem??
what can i do to make it better?
was it good??

ill rate high for anything..
x3

It's very good. It touches you in the heart. And if reminds me of the OC. Hope this helps and keep on writing.
-cindy

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