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hey guys. i'm usually good at this kind of stuff, but this part of the poem is really confusing. can you please help me out?

no fate (for you are my fate, my sweet), i want
no world (for beautiful you are my world, my true)
and it's you are whatever a moon has always meant
and whatever a sun will always sing is you

here is the deepest secret nobody knows
(here is the root of the root and the bud of the bud and the sky of the sky of a tree called life; which grows higher than the soul can hope or mind can hide)
and this is the wonder that's keeping the stars apart
i carry your heart (i carry it in my heart)

pllleeeease help. i will give you a 5 for trying, if you're not a smartass.

i hold your soul (deep within my very lips)
or
i taste your lips(locked on mine)
something like that, i don't really know if you wanted it to rhyme but i love poems so hope i helped

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(Rating: 4) i don't think you understood what i was trying to say. i needed to know what the poem meant. but thanks anyway.
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