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ok i dunno if i like this poem i wrote can you guys help me
Checking my pulse:
checking my pulse
trying to see if i'm alive
as i lay here
me sweat making my hair stick to my face
my heart pounding
my stomach spinning
checking my pulse
becuase i just told you
how i feel
i feel as if i've been lifted away
into a world unknown to me
into a world lead by you
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hey i just posted one of my poems look at it
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Rating: 3
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i have only rhymed one poem of mine and i dont like to rhyme becuase everyone else does ... thanks and i will check out your poems
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