Ask a serious question if you want a serious answer. Chances are, I'm older than most of these kids who think they have a degree in psychology. I can offer real advice, just drop me a note. Bullshit questions (and I can tell) will be either mocked or ignored completely, so ask at your own risk.
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I feel as if i'm outside myself watching life. It feels so stange, like a cat in new land.
YOu think I have no emotion, then you don't know me. If you could understand me, just listen you can hear my thoughts. The volume is always hight never quiet.
my smile is automatic, like a machine programed.
I want to tell you more, I want you to understand.
I don't know who I am. Too many voices. too many emotions.
I feel so lost! No one understands. I'm so insecure just waiting for your secure.
I reach out, I yell but my arms don't move not a sound escapes my mouth.
I'm so alone, So many voices, so many emotions....
Copyright ©2004 Kathleen Janette Bare
Is this a good poem? Let me know. I just wrote it.
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I don't know why this question was rated high by the moderators. First off, you're not looking for any kind of advice whatsoever. Second off, it's illegal to say something is copyrighted if it is not.
Third, it's a fair poem, I just find the topic really cliche.
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What ever, my poem is mine and I have the copy right. and this is a advice site and I want to know if my poem is good. take it up with the moderaters if you think other wise.
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