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?????????????????????????? Posted Friday June 25 2004, 3:39 pm
how come no one rates me?
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"You Never Know" Posted Thursday June 24 2004, 1:03 am
You never know what someone means to you until their gone.
Those are good words to live by, and here’s why.
Once a day, everyday I talked to two girls that rode my bus.
They were twins, and also older than me, they were seventeen.
They were always nice, not even once were they mean.
We would talk about all sorts of things.
They even helped Kyla with one of her reports.
I remember Kim would always drop her books on the floor.
One time Kathy tripped walking out the door.
Soon school was out, I had no fear that I would see them next year.
But I was wrong.
I heard about the accident from a friend, I didn’t know what she meant.
She said it was a car accident ...
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How?? Posted Monday June 21 2004, 8:38 pm
Okay I put poems on here....and you guys said be careful putting them on here or someone will steal them...how do I make it so no one can steal them??
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Poems... Posted Monday June 21 2004, 5:17 pm
"Run Away"
Run, run, run away.
Run away for it’s just begun.
Nothing is left to learn; nothing can be done.
Run away and never return.
Don't let it burn just,
Run, run, run away.
Don't confront the fears.
Run away and leave the tears.
Don't retreat.
It'll show defeat, so just,
Run, run, run away
"Life"
So much anger; so much sadness.
How'd I get myself wound up in all this madness?
To much stress; to much drama.
How do I clear up this mess?
So many tears; so little fears.
It's been like this for years.
Just young; trying to have fun.
Not many smiles; not many dreams...
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What do you think???!!! Posted Thursday June 17 2004, 11:39 pm
Do you guys notice that ppl are writting poems?? What's up with that? It's not like the poems are bad or anything, but THIS IS AN ADVICE PAGE!!!! NOT A POEM PAGE!!! Besides, not many ppl needs advice anymore....
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just a lil sumin i snapped together lol Posted Thursday June 17 2004, 5:53 pm
I wish I could change I wish I could
I wish I were not the person I am today
I wish I never did the things that I did
I wish I could just be with you right now
I wish You could see how hard I am trying
To be the perfect person you want me to be...
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My second poem - please tell me what you think ! Posted Saturday June 12 2004, 5:50 am
I wrote the poem which is in one of the previous posts entitled "Everytime" . I was feeling rather depressed today , and so i wrote another poem . Tell me what you think about it ....
Bt\ , to all those who asked ,
i'm 13 going on 14 .
You
I thought that I was contented
I thought I knew you
But that was just an illusion
You took me for a fool
All this pain that I went through
Did I ever mean anything to you ?
All those times I cried
Why weren’t you by my side?
So many nights I spent ,
Sitting by the phone
Just hoping you would call
I was so alone
You told me that...
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What do you think of my poem ? Please comment ! Posted Friday June 11 2004, 10:10 am
Everytime
Everytime you ignore me , my heart shatters
Everytime I see you with Her , I break inside
Everytime you treat me just like a little girl , I feel disappointed in you
You treat me like a game
I’ve sacrificed so much just to be seen worthy in your eyes
Why can’t you do the same ?
I can’t take it anymore ,
I try to break away ,
But I stay firmly bonded to you ,
You’re torturing me more and more each day
Everytime I smile you you ,
You just turn away ,
If you never loved me ,
Why did you have to play ?
Did you ever consider what I thought
Can’t you tell you just t...
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Challenges? Posted Tuesday June 8 2004, 3:07 am
I am a fourteen year old girl and I've been writing fiction, particularly fantasy, ever since I can remember. I'm suffering a minor case of writers block, and I'm looking for a challenge or a contest, preferably online with no entrance fee.
Does anyone know of any online contests going on right now? Any challenges?
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No More Posted Saturday June 5 2004, 1:30 am
Hey everyone I asked a Q about this poem a litle while back and I think I'm done but to those that answered before I would like to know what they think. and to all advicenators too but is it good at all now? just let me know please. Thanks.
No More
You laugh at me, You point.
You say "how weird!"
You say "how ugly!"
You say "how stupid!"
I turn the other cheek so you can just laugh and point some more.
I have cried my tears. I have hated myself for you.
There were times when I couldn't see through my tears and somehow I found the strengh to turn the other cheek but still you laughed and pointed more.
So in this poe...
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Aboutyou Posted Monday May 31 2004, 2:21 am
Why do you have to be so gay and stuck up on yourself? I hate people like you and I wish you would get a life that is more important than "High shoes" and being "snobby". For once think of someone other than yourself.
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No More Posted Friday May 28 2004, 8:09 pm
NO MORE
You laugh at me. You point, you say "how Weird" you say "how Ugly" you say "how Stupid".
I turn the other cheek so you can just laugh and point some more.
I have cryed my tears. I have hated myself for you.
I will always be here and you can't change that.
You will never make me feel bad again. NEVER!
So you better give up!
When I see you I laugh and say "How Pathetic!".
You have put me through this to make yourself feel good.
No More.
I have cryed my tears. I have hated myself for you But no more.
K.J.B.
Hi all advicenators! This is the only peom I have been able to write in the last 4...
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Posted Friday May 14 2004, 2:24 pm
How do you write an advice column for a magazine?
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i write poem and i want to know if they r good!K.L.D Posted Friday April 30 2004, 9:19 pm
__Takes my breath away__
Sitting next to him,
I like to say,
that he takes my breath away,
To the Lord,
I pray,
because he takes my breath away,
In my mind,
over and over I play,
"He takes my breath away",
his name is no use,
for all I say,
Is that he takes my breath away,
He's taken, I know,
but be it as it may,
he still takes my breath away.
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writing books Posted Tuesday April 27 2004, 10:01 am
How do you publish your own stories?
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Having trouble expressing creativity... Posted Monday April 26 2004, 3:27 am
As the question says. :) Not to toot my own horn or anything like that, but I consider myself a good writer, as do my teachers. Essays, articles, parodies and reports get consistently excellent marks. However, I've desired to write creative stories, specifically fanfiction, for a long time, but I'm having trouble writing anything. Last time I've written fanfic was at 14; now I'm 17, and I'm afraid I've lost any spontaneity and skill I might've had. I don't believe imagination to be the problem, but I have trouble writing them out onto paper/computer, and I also have the problem of being too self-critical, so I'm constantly editing and deleting things (which doesn't do much for progress!). Does anybody have any suggestions to help?
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how did i become this Posted Saturday April 17 2004, 12:53 am
how did i become a moderator for this site
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Posted Wednesday April 14 2004, 4:11 pm
Some people think teens are depressing
But im not im just expressing
My thought and feelings
Bout people and all the killings
But what about all the news
About drunks filled with booze
So if a lil poem is bad
then what about the sad
Look at this pity war
Is it me or is this for
someone to be put in history
For what
......a mystery?
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Posted Tuesday April 13 2004, 6:42 pm
Another happy poem :)
Life is life
Love is love
Angels are blessing
from above
you are an angel
and will always be
my heart bears a lock
but you hold the key
you are my sunshine
on a cloudy day
one who washes my tears away
my lifes been so much better
since ive meet you
i wish i could tell you
i wish you knew
if only you knew how much
you mean to me
thats what my only wish
.... would be
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Posted Tuesday April 13 2004, 6:33 pm
this is for c talon since he/she wants a better type of peotry instead of the "self pity"
My Friend
Life is full of ups and downs
smile laughter tears and frowns
but with all life's changes
its good to know
i have a friends to whon i can go
and no matter how hurt that
i have been
you always remind me i have a friend
my life has been blessed becaus eof you
your loving ways
and allt hat you do.
Happy this isnt a self pity poem!!!!
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