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Him
Posted Monday July 12 2004, 1:09 am
An etched out poem reread,
Many times crumbled and then smoothed.
Can this truly capture how I feel?
My words seem so far removed.
How can I define this feeling I get
At every accidental touch?
This energy, this passion,this undescribable lust
The most desirable and beautiful rush.
Words are far to capricious,
They die after being written down.
I need something with substance with truth,
Something with validity and sound.
A kiss can speak a thousand words
Even poets can not define.
So kiss me now so I can remember
All the things I wanted to say, but couldn't find.
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Abstract
Posted Friday July 9 2004, 1:10 pm
He loves her right?
She was so pretty..
He had such great teeth
She pushed him away
He didn't stay
But she knew he'd come back
So she could lay her head..
on his warm lap
But he never did
and so she bled
For every inch that peirced her thin
weary, tired, aching skin
she thought of him
But he wasn't there to dry her tears
or wipe up the crimson blood that stained
The knife she had
For every sapphire tear she shed
she would cut that much deeper
and so she bled
Girls like her just didn't slice
There flesh with kitchen knifes
The cold metal felt like ice
She was so pretty
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What do you think?
Posted Friday July 9 2004, 12:46 pm
Look no further, this is real.
I express the way I feel.
I am proud that I am me.
I am what I want to be.
I feel used; I feel alone.
I feel upset; I want to groan.
I feel hurt; I feel deprived.
I feel angry; I hate lies.
I feel hunger; I feel pain.
I feel like I have gone insane.
I feel happy, I’m all smiles.
At least for just a little while,
I put my true feelings away
To face another lonely day.
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Let it pour (please tell me what you think)
Posted Thursday July 8 2004, 10:07 pm
the weather man said
to expect showers
a purple umbrella lies abandoned on the ground
wet hair and clothes
let it pour
forget the heart ache and the lonesomeness
and the reason why I'm sore
every inch of my skin is drenched
the rain hides the tears
cheap mascara runs
and so do I
let it pour
flash back and I'm five years old
yellow rain coat and brunette waves
but here I am
the same, yet a little less sane
Not dancing, or singing, but drowning in the rain
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Poem?
Posted Thursday July 8 2004, 1:25 pm
You worry me,
You’re face so dark and cold.
You must be ready to kill me.
This night is dark,
No one will notice this.
No one will care.
You wanted me to die for years.
You revealed it tonight,
The night of hell.
My night of torment was not like before,
So sweet and full of cheer
Your good mood turned into anger,
And it engulfed me,
This will never be the same as it was before,
You thought I was a toy for you to play with,
But I’m not a voodoo doll,
But so it seems I have acted as one for you.
My whole life was a lie,
The life I spent with you,
The one that was most precious to me.
M...
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Hope you guys like my peom!!!!
Posted Wednesday July 7 2004, 5:12 pm
*~Confesions*~
You say you wanna be true with me
So you start confessing
Befor you start already a tear drops down
You confess everything
It feels like my heart broke
Tears are pouring down
I say how can you do this to me
He says Im sorry
I know Its over
I say Its over
Even though i know i did the right thing
I still love him
But i cant trust him
He lost y trust
So now its over
Maybe someday
My tears will go away.
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poetry
Posted Tuesday July 6 2004, 8:21 pm
If anyone knows a really good place to publish poems, let me know. also, if anyone has been published let me know, i would love to read them.
xo_always-Kerri
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Posted Tuesday July 6 2004, 1:16 pm
where is a good place to publish ur poertry?
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Emotions
Posted Monday July 5 2004, 5:52 pm
Emotions
I feel as if i'm outside myself watching life. It feels so stange, like a cat in new land.
YOu think I have no emotion, then you don't know me. If you could understand me, just listen you can hear my thoughts. The volume is always hight never quiet.
my smile is automatic, like a machine programed.
I want to tell you more, I want you to understand.
I don't know who I am. Too many voices. too many emotions.
I feel so lost! No one understands. I'm so insecure just waiting for your secure.
I reach out, I yell but my arms don't move not a sound escapes my mouth.
I'm so alone, So many voices, so many emotions....
Copyright ©2004 Kathleen Janette Bare
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Posted Sunday July 4 2004, 11:23 pm
well i used to be a awesome writier then all the sudden im gettin 0 on my paper tell me ways to help my writing
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poem
Posted Saturday July 3 2004, 4:16 pm
i write really good poems and i want 2 get them in a published book but i dont kno how, can sum1 help me
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Posted Friday July 2 2004, 1:06 am
quotes ppl i need quotes anyone have any good ones just answer this advice piece with as many as you got ! .. COM EON YOU GUYS GOTTA HAVE SOMETHING!
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quote aholic
Posted Friday July 2 2004, 1:01 am
i need some good quotes anybody got any ?
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publishing
Posted Thursday July 1 2004, 1:23 pm
okay, i know i kinda already asked this question, but i didn't really get very many use-albe answers. i want to publish some of my poems. i've already done it at poetry.com, and through american poets society, but i need some more (preferably free) places where i can publish them.
(online places work the best for me... any websites you know of?)
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publishing poems
Posted Thursday July 1 2004, 11:54 am
does anybody know where i can get my poems published? for free?
i've already been published by poetry.com, and american poets society, but i'm looking for some new places... got any ideas?
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Posted Saturday June 26 2004, 1:46 pm
hey if any1 knows some really funny jokes than tell them to me!!! I am a struggling comic person!!!
thanx,
comedy person
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2 xohannah
Posted Saturday June 26 2004, 1:37 pm
Check ure inbox!!!!! PLZ!!!!!!!!
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Posted Saturday June 26 2004, 1:00 pm
well me and my friends want to earn money but nothing seems to work that great (and our moms wont let us baby sit)!!!!!!
we have tried:
-car wash
-doing work around the house
thanx bunches,
need money
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how come...
Posted Friday June 25 2004, 10:52 pm
How come I dont have anything in my INBOX????
I give really good advice but i dont get any mail!!
thanx,
*~bre_babbles~*
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Posted Friday June 25 2004, 10:34 pm
When i go over to my friends there is nothing to do so i need some ideas!! ( i am a girl and so is my friend so dont give us any perveted things)!!
thanxs!!!
~*RiSs*~
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