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How does this lil poem sound, be honest
Posted Thursday July 29 2004, 2:31 am
I never knew I could feel this way..
When I first saw you, I knew it was true, the one for me was soo you.
you walked over to me and asked me my name..
Gosh the sound of ur voice drove me insane..
i loved how u didnt try and spit that stupid game,
and how you thought the "playa status" was hella lame.
you looked me in the eye and said i was the girl you had dreamed of.
yah, i was that lucky dream girl you wanted to love..
i was speechless and didnt know what to say,
so you said, "baby i love you more than words can explain. i know youre the one for me..God obviously brought me in this way..cause it's you and me together, forever, starting today.."
BE HONEST
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i wunna be a writer!!
Posted Wednesday July 28 2004, 9:14 pm
id like to be a writer when i grow ^ maybe for the miami herald. like i wunna be maybe even the advice columnist. anything in the miami herald would be awesome. i dk wut should i do to practice 4 the future? i really want to be a writer!! does it pay alot?!?! p.s. i kno writers spell everything right its just im 13!! lol. and i like spelling stuff wrong unless its for school like a project, homework, or an assignment!! lol!! im going to 8th grade.
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poems
Posted Wednesday July 28 2004, 6:11 pm
does anyone know where i can publish my poetry besides poetry.com? i really want to get some published because i have so many poems...thanks.
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Quotes for the class of 2010
Posted Tuesday July 27 2004, 9:27 am
I wanted to know if you could do like rhyming quotes for me or something about 2010? Cuz i cant find anywhere on websites ..quotes about 2010... ok well thanx!
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Friends Always
Posted Monday July 26 2004, 11:07 pm
Maybe my everything was just something in your eyes
My reality was less than perfect...
And my dreams you didn't understand
Everyone thought we were so perfect together
The cheerleader and the rock star,
I was in love with some one else..
He wasn't labeled
I was
He had everything to offer
I had nothing to return
I still sleep with that blanket he gave me
The boy I want to marry I met at barely sixteen
"Friends always" he signed at the end of his message
In my yearbook
next to all the fake "love ya lots" and "xoxo"
from the other cheerleaders..athletes.. hopefuls.. and rock stars
Read it again..
...
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hey everyone
Posted Monday July 26 2004, 9:26 pm
Hey i jus signed up for this Advise thing and i would love if someone would ask me a question in my inbox! it would help me out alot since i love helping people out. i think im pretty good at it, and i hope i can help you with your questions! Please feel free to ask me anything in my inbox! ill get back to you asap!
Thx!
KT
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um...
Posted Monday July 26 2004, 1:37 am
Hey do u guys kno the name of this song and who sings it?
Baby anything u say i'll do
cause i only want to make u happy
from the bottom of my heart its true
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do you think this is good?
Posted Sunday July 25 2004, 10:18 pm
You don't gotta tell me again...
I have heard it all before.
I want this all to end.
No I don't want more.
You said it was all my fault.
I felt like I could scream!
You said you wished I was gone...
I thought we were a team!
I thought I could tell you anything,
then I told you everything.
I was oh so wrong...
You said nice words and sudu*ed me..
just wanting me to suck your shl*ng.
Well, ya kno what boy!?
I ain't no toy...
So don't you play w/ me..
I should have known from the begining...
IT WAS NEVER MEANT TO BE...
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Is this any good?
Posted Sunday July 25 2004, 9:51 pm
You don't gotta tell me again...
I have heard it all before.
I want this all to end.
No I don't want more.
You said it was all my fault.
I felt like I could scream!
You said you wished I was gone...
I thought we were a team!
I thought I could tell you anything,
then I told you everything.
I was oh so wrong...
You said nice words and suduced me..
just wanting me to suck your shlong.
Well, ya kno what boy!?
I ain't no toy...
So don't you play w/ me..
I should have known from the begining...
IT WAS NEVER MEANT TO BE...
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Posted Saturday July 24 2004, 10:03 pm
well im one of the ppl who has an advice column ( babyxtx09 ) and i wrote this poem and its the first one ive written in like 8 months so im kinda rusty but i wanted to know wut ppl think of it..
Why do these emotions keep reoccuring?
All these feelings I have for you seem enduring
I thought I'd put them aside and they were through
But it seems as if my heart disagrees and I don't know what to do
Why can't I tell you up front and out right?
I feel like such a coward, try as hard as I might
I don't understand why it's with you that I feel this bond
Or why you're the one of which I'm so fond
If only there was a way I could get through to you to believe
Just how much...
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Eh? Any good?
Posted Saturday July 24 2004, 7:11 pm
Just curious if this is any good or not...wrote it awhile ago
Tomorrow Never Comes
If tomorrow never comes,
And time quickly slips away
Will you float away happy
Or surely regret every living day?
If tomorrow never comes,
Will you regret every smile you never gave?
All the words you never said?
A phone call never made?
Think about it now
And think about it clear
If tomorrow never came
Would you look back and shed a tear?
For all the time your determination fell short?
Or when you painfully just gave up
Would you spend your days crying?
Or spend them living it up?
Would you talk shit behind peo...
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this sound more like a song or poetrys?
Posted Friday July 23 2004, 8:34 pm
Come on Come on
You know its time to go
it times to let go
there nothing to hold on to
gotta let go to get over it
we cant live in the past. there nothing we cand do change that.. oh come on come get ready let go its times to let go.. nothing nothing we can do and hold on to. I dont want to know I want to let go.. so can we go now..
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this sound more like a song or poetrys?
Posted Friday July 23 2004, 8:33 pm
Come on Come on
You know its time to go
it times to let go
there nothing to hold on to
gotta let go to get over it
we cant live in the past
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is thiis qood ?
Posted Friday July 23 2004, 3:09 pm
okay i wrote a poem and i wanna know what yoo thiink
never will a day pass that i dont think of you i may not show it but i truely am in love with you i know its true alls i can think about is you your more than a person to me your my inspriation you mean the world to me .. only if you would open your eyes and see how much u mean to me
ehh it probably sucks !! =(
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Is this good?
Posted Friday July 23 2004, 1:57 pm
A Soldiers Tears
I was scared stiff
For i knew that this pain wouldn't ever lift
I took one last look at my baby
Hoping one day maybe i would see her again
I looked around
I saw 20,000 frowns
But we all knew
As the wind blew
Today wont go by fast
It wont be a thing of the past
It will stay in our minds forever
Please someone just pull the lever
He gave us the go
And we all began to flow
I felt a tear
Symbolizing my fear
I knew it was the end
Good bye my dear friend
We began to march
And we formed our arch
We placed them on our shoulder
The wind ...
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are these good?????????//?????????????????????
Posted Thursday July 22 2004, 4:05 pm
Anna Joe
The kid no one really knows
Just sat
She was kind of fat
Every day people would critize
About her size
I was the only one who heard her crys
Her endless sighs
I never knew
What she was about to do
It was a misty Monday
I wish she found have found another way
We walked in
Right before she commited her sin
They laughed at her and called her fat
And there I sat
Wanting it to stop
I could have fought
Before I could think
In just one blink
She reached in her shirt
Everyone screamed as shots beamed
Up and down each row
Then it came to me and she said no ...
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Is this one good?
Posted Thursday July 22 2004, 3:45 pm
This red scary night
He came home and began another fight
I hear mommy's cries
Because of all daddies lies
She pushes me aside
And tells me to hide
I run to my room under my bed
And i cover my head
I hear mommy scream
As daddy's fists beam
I see mommy hit the ground
I close my eyes and try to get rid of al this sound
She just lies there
Blood comes down as i stare
I start to cry
I heard him walk by
I wished he would'nt find me laying under my bed
As I stared at mommy lying there dead
But he did
And asked my why I hid ...
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dig or dis
Posted Thursday July 22 2004, 12:32 pm
Empty: Empty would be the word to use to describe me.
I go through life living in a world of my own.
A world that is filled with nothing but darkness.
A world that is full of pain, depression, and sadness.
I always feel like I’m alone.
Like no one wants to be around me.
So I put on an act just so I can feel wanted.
I go around being some one that I’m not.
Just so people will accept me.
But what would be the point of doing so.
If by the time I get home I still feel nothing but emptiness
What would be the point if I can’t be myself?
Am I really that afraid of what people would say about me?
...
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Do you like this
Posted Wednesday July 21 2004, 10:55 pm
MY GREATEST ENEMY
My closest friend has become my greatest enemy.
She betrayed me by lying to my face.
By trying to get me to believe a lie.
By trying to get into the middle of my relationship and then lying about it.
Instead of her listening and trying to help me with my problems.
All she did in return was use everything to get revenge on me.
For some thing that wasn’t even true.
She has become my greatest enemy.
She will no longer be there for me.
She will no longer be able to talk to me.
She will no longer be a friend to me.
She has become my greatest enemy.
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is this good????
Posted Wednesday July 21 2004, 10:16 pm
I thought you would be the person to let me know that it is ok to be able to trust people , to let them know how you feel.
I thought you could show me how it feels to have someone who really cares about me.
I thought I could depend on you to always be there for me.
I thought you really cared about me.
I thought you really wanted to be with me.
I never thought you would be the person to hurt me.
I never had a thought you and I would never be together.
I always thought you were going to be there when I need you.
I never thought any one could hurt me as bad as you did.
I would have dreams of me and you being to...
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