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Which of these thesis paper topics (about anything in American History)sounds more like a thesis & something a teacher would probably prefer?
1. Arthur Miller's personal life experinces were the biggest contributuions to his success as a great American playwright.
2. Many different events and issues in the later half of the 20th century helped to shape the ideology of American theatre.

(these would not be the final thesis sentences...i will re-word them...I just need a feel for which is better.)

I think the 2nd thesis statement sounds more apropriate, and you could probably use better ideas to support it.

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