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I'm a mom of 3 kids in a long term relationship. I like to think I'm fairly smart(IQ 131), but I definitely don't know everything. I work a regular job, finished high school, but dropped out of my first year of college. I'm not religious, but I think of myself as pretty spiritual. I'm always watching and reading new things that interest me, because I love to learn new things. I guess you can really ask me anything, I love to give advice. I'm sure the people that will benefit best from my advice are other people like me, but don't take my word on it ;)
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Okay, These are two poems
I, Who
I, Who walks the path of unconsiousness lives an Illusion
Breaths the air, Walks the earth
Thou this day my heart still beats
(What does this poem mean? ^)
2nd Poem..
I Am
I am, that tint of light in your heart
I wonder, When I look at the moon do you look also?
I hear, Your whisper, your cry, your sadness
I see, That teardrop stream down your face
I want to be that person to lift you up off your feet
I am, that tint of light in your heart
I pretend to be nothing but a friend to you
I felt, Nothing but love for you
I touch, Your heart with my own words
I worry, that one day I won't be here when you really need me
I cried, when you've cried
I am, That tint of light in my heart
I understand that when something hurts it stings
I say I've felt that pain many times before
I dream, You dream, We all dream
I hope one day you will the same for me
I want to be that tint of light in your heart
Both of these poems where written by me, I just wanted some outlook on others what they think it means to them.
Thanks :)
The first poem, conveys to me a person that is living for nothing anymore. They are an empty shell putting on an facade so others do not see the emptiness.
The second poem, seems to be someone confessing their love to someone that they can't actually confess their love too. confessing to someone that is hurting, but they can't be more then just there for that person.
(Rating: 5) Wow, The reason why I asked is because I guess I didn't quiet understand my own poem but you couldn't have possibly worded it in a better way. That is exactly how it was meant to feel. Thank you so much for letting me know what it meant to you :)