I don`t know i`m a cool guy. I have ben told I am very smart for my age. I like a number of differant things like games, movies and music. I will be up to giving the best advice I possibly can
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Mr-Fix-It
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this isn't for homework -- just an opinion. what do you guys think this poem is about?, or what do you think about how it is written? any opinions at all would be good. :]
a heart nailed to a tree
fenced in and out of reach
you watched the crucifixion that lasted years
screams against deaf ears
helped surfaced brand new fears:
that your arms would never stretch for enough
that this heart could never be saved
that those shouts may never be heardor that the heart you wanted would change
when the torture was complete
the gate was open and the heart was free
a steady crescendo with each new beat
it lay bloodied under autumn's changing leaves
straining against the loudest sound
of the happy, bright thing you've found
a realization (something great could grow here someday)
a determination (maybe it is always all the same)
that could rip stars straight out of the sky
i have no right to ask this
i know i had my chance to try
but something about all of this
won't let me watch it die
you're happy in a safe placeprobably with greener grass and far less gore
i want to put that old smile on your face
i promise not to let you down anymore this wasted field is your place
the heart is always yours
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WOW thats cool and deep it sounds like your trying to break free frome your shell to the love you had at first. But yet some one keeps on pushing you back in know mater how hard you push. It's awesome.
Mr-Fix-It
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Rating: 5
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That's actually kind of what my mindset was. :P Thanks!
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