Hey, My name is Laura! I'm a sophmore in high school. I blow out my 16 candles on December 22. I don't really know what to say on here, but I love to help anyone!
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Well this is the first song i've written it's not that good but i just need advice on how i can improve the song or if it's good or if i need to change afew words
heres the song-
Over you
You left like you never knew me
You could've stayed
We could've worked it out
But you just took off and ran
Oh baby if only you knew
How much i loved you
& needed you Ohhh
But babe i'm just so over you
Over you
Completely over you
Ohhh overrr you
I just don't need you
Over you
So many sleepless night
& never did you care
So many tears and fears
& you were never there
I've worked real hard &
Never mind the nights i had to cry
Better off without you ooohhh
But babe i'm just so over you
Over you
Completely over you
Ohhh overrr you
I just don't need you
Over you
You were just so crul
You lied so many times
made me cry so many times
You'll come back no doubt
But boy im so much smarter and wiser
i dont need you
I got through alone
Babe Im just so voer youu
Overr you yehhh
Over youuuu (link)
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oh my god! i can COMPLETELY relate to this song! this is truly AMAZING HOW IT IS.
I LOVE IT.
if you record it, i have to hear this!
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