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Member Since: March 25, 2006
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Last Update: April 13, 2006
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i was wondering if anyone knows any poems about love and romantic things i really need like at least three but if you onlt know 1 or 2 it's ok i still wanna hear them plez let me hear your poems (link)
Tell me if you like my poem


Sometimes I feel lost when everything i do
seems so wrong.
But with your powerful words you make me
feel so strong.
Whenever my heart is crushed,
I cry day and night...
but when i see your loving smile
everythings alright.
when i have a bad day and are feeling blue,
I just remember all the sweet things you do.
When somethings on my mind but im afraid
to share,you can always get it out of me








by saying,tell me so i can be there.
When im alone and scared,shivering with fright,
you warm me and comfort me by holding me tight.
You are the love of my life and i will never
be able to forget the warmth,the smiles and
the Love you've given ,I know that you were sent to me from Heaven.
*************************************************
You can be my nightmare,
you can be my dream come true,
it really dosnt matter,
i just need u to know that i love u,
what happen while waiting to grow up,will we stay together or drift apart,if wait,wait how long,will our love stay strong,or fade through the years,if we fall apart,will we be friends,or will we never see nor talk to eachother ever again,i need to know,your what makes me whole,when your here with me,the glass is half full,when your gone its just half empty,your what makes me...me
**************************************************
Roses are Red and Hearts are too
Would you be my Valentine?
If I told you I love you.
Would you be my Valentine?
hearts red and candy too
would you walk with me to Heaven
I promise I'll see you through.
Would you be my Valentine?
and shoot your cupids bow
straight thru the Hearts of lovers
to start a burning glow.
Would you be my Valentine?
and hold me close to your heart.
I'll make us a place in paradise,
and thats where we'll make our start.
Would you be my Valentine?
Roses Red , Violets Blue,
If I asked you to hold me,
Is that something you'd want to do?
Would you be my Valentine?
and give me a kiss or two,
Would you be my Valentine ?
If I just simply asked you to.

Hey hun i just got your feed back yeah i write a lot of poems and i am working on a career for it i have poems for many subjects anything you want to read just let me know ok buh byes


Rating: 5
ok my freaking god you are so good good thanx a millon u helped me so much you should sell your poems really you should you are super good i will be asking some poems from you in the futer if you keep making poems i am so jelous i asked for help cause i can't write poems but DAMN you can you should be proud of your self if you sell poems let me know i wanna be your first costumer thanx a millon it really helped
sincerlly,
vicky





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