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and feedback on this poem is helpful, thanks
i'm falling faster and harder
with each thought i think
my heart is growing rapidly
and my mind begins to shrink
the pulse begins to quicken
and my hands begin to shake
if this is a dream
i wish never to awake
each moment is torture
my nerves twisted and torn
but each breath it loosens
and comfort is born
my predictions were not guarantees
i quickly figured out
each road to my heart was hidden
forcing him to discover a new route
I had been so wrapped in worry
that the entrances were blocked
but he seemed to have the key
to each door that had been locked
he had come upon the threshold
and no longer could I lie
i met love at the door
and my eyes read goodbye (link)
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Dang... That is sooooooo good! I really like it. Did you do that your self?
xoxoALI
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Rating: 5
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thanks...yeah i did do it myself...thanks again:)
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