Member Since: July 20, 2004
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Last Update: October 4, 2004
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ok i dunno if i like this poem i wrote can you guys help me
Checking my pulse:
checking my pulse
trying to see if i'm alive
as i lay here
me sweat making my hair stick to my face
my heart pounding
my stomach spinning
checking my pulse
becuase i just told you
how i feel
i feel as if i've been lifted away
into a world unknown to me
into a world lead by you
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It sounds like a pretty good poem. What I got from it is you like this guy and you feel like you have died and gone to heaven and pretty much your version of heaven some kind of world that focuses around this guy you like. Did I get that right?
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yeah thats what its about .... but in real life i am not sure if i like him but thats how i feel when i am around him even tho when i am away from him hes just a friend to me AHHH confusion lol thanks for your thoughts
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