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E-mail: J3NiblAk3@yahoo.com
Gender: Female
Location: South Carolina
Occupation: StUdEnT @ SaHs
Age: 15
AIM: pAlMeToSuGaNeSs
Yahoo: J3NiblAk3
Member Since: May 30, 2004
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Last Update: August 26, 2004
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You worry me,
You’re face so dark and cold.
You must be ready to kill me.
This night is dark,
No one will notice this.
No one will care.
You wanted me to die for years.
You revealed it tonight,
The night of hell.

My night of torment was not like before,
So sweet and full of cheer
Your good mood turned into anger,
And it engulfed me,
This will never be the same as it was before,
You thought I was a toy for you to play with,
But I’m not a voodoo doll,
But so it seems I have acted as one for you.
My whole life was a lie,
The life I spent with you,
The one that was most precious to me.

My life was wasted on you,
Your face is the worst sight in the world.
If only I could trust you anymore,
We could live in a fairy tale.
But, your last lie to me,
Won’t make anything the same,
You said you would hold my hand through thick and thin,
But you never said torture and cruelty,
I’m an idiot to trust you.

Blood drips upon this paper as I write my last goodbye
Can't you see that all we ever had was but a lie
I sit here and wonder just how hard you tried
To sing me to sleep that night with your one cold lullaby
But to your pleasure it’s enough
Because you just heard the sound of my voice choke.


Ok, I know this was terrible, but please give me some feedback.

Wow that's deep! your work is awesome..keep up the good stuff

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(Rating: 5) Hey, thanks, I'm gonna try to turn it into a song for my band, if we ever get big, I'll post it on the site.


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