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http://www.buddy4u.com/view/?u=storyytimee

hey i added more to my story,
it would be amazing if you could
tell your friends about it maybe
and tell me what i could to make it
better, omg thanks so much :]

I think it's taking too long to get to what the point of the story is. It'd be better if you could make them longer [idk if that site has a limit or something?].

Jayson seems gay. Lololol.
overall i'm still interested in reading more.

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(Rating: 5) haha yeah they all act gay its the funniest thing. but right now it's going into the main plot of the story, you see I'm not real sure on how to end it or anything because I don't know whats going to happen next since I'm writing about May right now ha
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