I'm a somewhat logical thinker, though sometimes my mind wanders off into deep fantasy space. My relatives and friends alike can't understand me, which is okay with me, since I can't make heads or tails of some of them either. These faults aside, I enjoy a lot of different things, from all sorts of music, to reading, writing, rambling in the woods and in the verbal form, and have recently discovered photography, though I'm horrible at it. I try being funny, and am noted for suceeding in it. (Though on occasion, my friends wish I were less of a clown in some situations.) My sole confidants are my parakeet and two cats, to whom I tell all my secrets and fears to. Maybe that's why they've gone a bit psychotic. My friends and siblings often are drawn to me for advice, which I have, over the years, given out willingly, and have been informed recently that I'm quite good at giving it.
Website: Foxshadow's Forest
Gender: Female
Location: From a galaxy far, far away. Or the U.S.A. Whichever's easier for you.
Occupation: I am currently employed by my friends as a professional laugh-maker.
AIM: swyftefoxshadow
Member Since: February 13, 2004
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Last Update: January 24, 2006
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Hey adivce culumnists. I have a Question I write poetry and am wondering what you think of this? The last poem an this question is published by eternal portraits. I really don't get support with poetry.
I have three poems I want you to look at and tell me what you think.It would mean alot to me! Thanx!
What A Wonderful Life
As a young girl lays in bed one night.
She thinks of her life happenings.
She thinks of the smiles.
She thinks of the frowns.
She thinks of the tears that have been shed.
She thinks of the feelings of having her heart broken.
She thinks of the feelings of having her heart mended.
She thinks of all the people she knows and smiles.
What a Wonderful Life!
The Song Of Spring
Spring come to me Please don't leave me here alone!
Bring to me the song of Spring
Bring to me the Tulips and Daffodils.
Bring to me the Blue Blue sky and Green Green grass.
Bring to me the chirpping birds and the Buzzz of the Bees.
Please don't leave me here!
I'm tired of the gloom and doom!
No more cold cold days
No more fog to to see!
Leave the rain and wind behind!
Bring to me the song of Spring
Lord I Wonder?
Lord I wonder why I feel alone?
I know thou watchest over me.
I know thou watchest me come closer too thee.
I know thou watchest me go a stray from thee.
I know thou lovest me, then why do I a stray from thee?
I lovest thee, thy Lord then why do I 'cause thee pain?
I thank thee Lord for loving me, I thank thee Lord.
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I loved the second one, since spring is one of my favorite seasons. The first one is a tad cliched, but I enjoyed it nonetheless. And the third one is a bit like a prayer, but it's wording was done nicely! Keep up the great work! ^_^
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